A letter from the Post Office about a service called "Informed Delivery(R)".
Messy, folksy, and verbose. The normal and expected amount of "pleases" -- all were unnecessary.
The letter had two goals: One to disable the account I just built, and a second to explain why I wanted the account. The two were haphazardly intermingled
This could have been a tighter letter, with better organization. For things like this, be short-and-sweet. The letter was not as bureaucratic as most governmental letters, which was nice.
It was fun to edit on a lazy afternoon.
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