Wednesday, April 27, 2022

USPS Informed Delivery Paper Mail


A letter from the Post Office about a service called "Informed Delivery(R)".

Messy, folksy, and verbose.  The normal and expected amount of "pleases" -- all were unnecessary. 

The letter had two goals:  One to disable the account I just built, and a second to explain why I wanted the account.  The two were haphazardly intermingled

This could have been a tighter letter, with better organization.  For things like this, be short-and-sweet.  The letter was not as bureaucratic as most governmental letters, which was nice.

It was fun to edit on a lazy afternoon.

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